Very, very well made song. The thing that killed it for me was the 1:40 cut. Very catchy, though, and really groovy.
I see where you're trying to go. However, it just doesn't work. The melody is boring and repetitive, and so are the drops. Also, the sounds used weren't the best. Here's an example of chipstep that works very well. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/718457 I think you'd be able to be up to that level at some point.
Oh, and by the way, I'm not an expert at production, and I'm still learning, too.
I honestly like the second drop XD. (And yes, I'm reviewing from a non-joke perspective.) WHat I didn't like was how the melody was a arrangement of the original...but then again, it's just an April Fool's joke so... REALLY GOOD.
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